Here’s another review of a free spanking story over at the Library of Spanking Fiction. Walking Disaster is by Ruegirl, and you can find it listed under her “Serials” stories. Walking Disaster has 10 chapters.
This is the first story I’ve read by Ruegirl. I chose her story for this review because she’s one of the biggest contributors to the Library of Spanking Fiction. She has 210 serials (that’s actually 210 chapters of serials), 124 stories and 1 poem listed on the site. That’s a serious amount of writing.
Walking Disaster is a reference to the main character, Grace. She tends to be a bit clumsy, not to mention frequently late and accident prone. Yet, as Jake finds out, she’s very good at her job. Jake decides to “help” Grace be more focused. In no time, they are lovers, but Grace discovers that Jake is not the man she thought he was.
Ruegirl’s spanking scenes are excellent, and there is plenty of them in this story. If Grace isn’t getting spanked by Jake, Becka is getting spanked by her husband, Tony. Becka and Tony are secondary characters in the story. They are a married couple with a routine Friday night spanking. Their Friday night spankings add a little spice to the story too.
The writing in Walking Disaster is excellent. You do have to pay attention to the characters’ names because the scenes move and change rather quickly. This is the kind of story I love. Jake starts out just wanting to help Grace, though he’s obviously attracted to her. Soon, he’s in love with her, but as the plot progresses, Jake has to help Grace get over his betrayal of her trust. Will Jake and Grace live happily after ever with Friday spankings too? You’ll have to go read Walking Disaster at the Library of Spanking Fiction.
(If you need to know how to access stories at the Library of Spanking Fiction, you can read my initial review of this free spanking story website.)
This spanking story review is not about a free spanking story. It’s part of the membership site Discipline and Desire. With over 700 spanking stories online, Discipline and Desires members usually take some time getting through all the stories, especially when more are added every week.
The Houseboat is written by Katrina Devlin. She’s one of my favorite authors on the site. She often writes historical spanking stories, but this one is a contemporary. After reading The Houseboat, I sure hope she decides to write more contemporary stories, specifically about a few of the characters in this story.
The Houseboat is 9 chapters long. All 9 chapters are already available on the site. Members of the site know that new stories are introduced one chapter at a time, but once it’s completely released, the entire story remains available in the database until it eventually is released in an ebook. I really like the longer stories as I’ve said before. I like to really get to know the characters. Other readers may like shorter stories that get right down to the spanking scenes.
In The Houseboat, the spankings are not the main focus. This is a relationship story about Ruby and Will and how two very different people come together and fall in love. What really makes this story special is the unique secondary characters, specifically Ruby’s family and Will’s band members. I would love to see Amelia and Cary as wells as Pryor and Ariana get their own stories. Katrina does an amazing job with creating characters that you can’t get enough of.
Ruby Davenport is a 36-year-old woman getting over a bitter divorce and the death of her young son. She decides to start a new life by buying a houseboat and living on it. Docked next to her houseboat is “Strummer” which is owned by Will, a musician with specific ideas about how bad behavior from a woman should be handled. While Ruby is trying to put together a new life, she realizes she wants Will to be a part of that life, even if he does have a firm hand.
This is a fun story with great dialogue. My favorite part of The Houseboat is that the spanking seems like such a natural part of the story. If you are a member of Discipline and Desire, please make The Houseboat your next reading choice. You won’t be sorry.
Here’s another free spanking story from Library of Spanking Fiction. You have visited there, haven’t you? If you haven’t, what are you waiting for? This one is by Flopsybunny who has 104 serials and 45 stories on this site. The number keeps climbing. Flopsybunny manages this site, and it appears she’s the most frequent contributor too.
So let’s get to A Perfect Date (it’s under the P’s not the A’s). This is the first story by flopsybunny that I’ve read. It’s a short story, but packed with fun. You will really feel for poor Amanda who gets the raw end of the deal (I know, I had to do it) from the cop and her boyfriend, Greg. This is a very quick read with a little surprise twist thrown in at the end. If you are in the habit of making out in a car, you might think again after reading this one. Well, if you are a woman that is. The guys may have another opinion. It was definitely a perfect date for Greg.
I’ll be reading more from Flopsybunny. She’s a talented writer, and I love how she gets right into the action of a short story. So for a quick read tonight, look up A Perfect Date on the Library of Spanking Fiction. You won’t be sorry.
What’s your preference when writing or reading spanking stories - short stories, novels, or series? Your preferences may be different as a reader than it is as a writer.
For me, I really enjoy reading series spanking stories. By that I mean, stories that are all based around a theme - like a concept, place or maybe family. For example, I’ve talked before about Nattie’s Sanders Center series at Discipline and Desire. Each story stands alone and each has a different set of central characters, but the characters from previous stories make appearances throughout the series. It really allows for a lot of character development, and the author is able to build on the theme of the series. In this case, the theme is the concept of a center that helps women (and later, couples) through the use of spanking as discipline. I love the whole idea of revisiting characters from previous stories. It’s like catching up with old friends.
The Monroe County series also at Discipline and Desire is another example of a spanking story series, but these stories are actually written by different authors. It’s called a collaborated series. In the Monroe County series, the theme is a small town where it’s common and expected for husbands to discipline their wives. The site has 2 other collaborated series. The Agency is based in the year 2015 when domestic discipline has made a comeback, and the stories in the Personal Trainer series are all about Tony and his unique methods for motivating his clients.
As for writing spanking stories, I tend to only have time to write short stories. Occasionally, I will write a sequel to a story based on the same characters. I’d love to try to write a longer spanking story, something with many chapters that could also later become a series. I’m hoping to find time to do this very soon, and of course, you’ll get to read the story right here on Spanking Storybook. Now if I could just come up with an intriguing theme.
There’s a place for all kinds of spanking stories. Short stories are wonderful for quick bedtime reads, and longer novels let you really get into an involved plot and complex characters. So what do you think? How do you prefer your spanking stories? Or is any spanking story a good spanking story?
Now I promised I’d do some spanking story reviews from the Library of Spanking Fiction. Here’s the first one.
I randomly looked for one of the latest stories posted. I read Cherry Hart Falls by Juliabee. You need to be signed in to read this story (registration is free). Go to Juliabee’s stories and select “Serials.” There you’ll find the 3 chapters of Cherry Hart Falls.
Juliabee does nice job with developing the plot of this story. No, every chapter is not full of spanking, but by the time Mac and Lexie get to it, you will be cheering them on. Mac struggles with his feelings for Lexie, but he finally realizes she’s the women for him. You’ll love Lexie’s sassy attitude.
It’s an enjoyable story with lots of fun dialogue. If anything I would have liked the story to be longer. The secondary characters will also make you laugh. Lorna, Lexie’s sister, or Tina could easily have their own stories come out of this one (I’m hinting and hoping). Cherry Hart Falls seems like a spanking fun place to be.
I’ll definitely be checking back to see if Juliabee adds any new stories or serials on Library of Spanking Fiction.
